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Post  Bethany on Sat Nov 01, 2008 3:23 pm

Just a short poem I thought of, hopefuly it will help people remember to check their bonfires:

Check you bonfires before you set them alight,
For a tired, sleepy Hedgehog just might,
Be Hibernating in his warm, sheltered bed,
But because of you, he might soon be dead!


What do you think?
It's short, it gets to the point. I'm no poet Embarassed , but it will do.

Bethany.


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Post  Trish on Sat Nov 01, 2008 3:57 pm

That's really good Bethany!! Bravo

I write a bit of poetry from time to time. study

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Post  Bethany on Sun Nov 02, 2008 1:05 am

I once got a poem published in a book when I was a primary school. I'll see if I can get that telent back again lol! Grin
I'll write some more later.

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Post  Hoggy on Sun Nov 02, 2008 8:19 am

I think the poem is really good. It might be a small poem, but it has the impact on you, and the message. And it's easy to remember.

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